Tuesday, 22 July 2014

Story Writing Competition

Back in June, Mr Wadley launched a story writing competition. Children from all campuses within IPACA were invited to take part in a story writing competition. The challenge was for all children to write for half an hour a day for the whole month of June.

With much excitement the pupils in west Base rose to the challenge, we had dedicated story writing areas...


Today was the day when the winners were announced. The entered were judged by year 10 pupils and Mr Wadley- we learnt they were looking for originality and humour and are very excited to share with you the winners...


In third police was Lawrence, second went to Billy and the winner (with a story that had the year 10's in stitches) was Jacob!



A massive well done to all the children who took part, all entered were fabulous!

Jacob would like to share his winning story with you (Both Billy and Lawrence say they will publish theirs on Kindle, coming soon...)



Jacob's Story

once upon a time there lived a bonker man he lived in a tall tower near the harbor .  
he had a big fat ugly wife. everyday she’ll say go back to bed now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so i went back to bed.Sudley a big thumb hit the floor BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.And the fat ugly stupid wife had a heart attack the children cried and cried and cried MUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.so thay stiped her of and put her on a skateboard and rolled her down down into the cupboard. And out the door BUYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!big fat ugly women. I HOPE YOU DON'T COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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                 chapter 2             new women                              

The smelly man got up and woke his children up.The set of to find a new wife.And he found a wife that had a
cast on and a broken leg.SUNDLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the smelly man said
hay thats mum ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. GET OUT OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.OK
MOODY cow.

CHAPTER 3 ugley

Dad you need to have a good shave all right i'll go into the toilet and stick my head down it.NO!!!!!!!!!!

so he did it and shaved his dogs hair off.All the hair went out the window.AND he went out to find a girlfriend .
WOW he cried.Thats one pretty women.The children went ERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!She looks like poo.

chapter 4 dinner

I eat poo. And for my drink i have wee.For my pudding i eat worm pie with spiders in in it.The children
had worn bolognese.It had peenuts in it.the laddy is tougether with each other.THAY kissed each other and
ill tell you the mans name is Lawrence . And the girls name is Louise.Lawrence said skedaddle he
cried.no.

                                             Chapter 5 hair

Hello bold women the chilldren said errrrrrrrr!!! Ugley.So thay had tea together mmmmmuuuuunnnnnn
cccccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!.yumm Iove you so thay kissed
the holl day long.
        the end!!


4 comments:

Miss Heppell said...

Great work guys. Well done to all who entered. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every single entry.

charlie mccann said...

jocob well done and well done to evry one how enterd

Anonymous said...

wow jocob you wite a fab story well done

Rose Ealson said...

i loved it so much well done evry won for enterin the challage